Comments on: Valentine SWEETS http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/ Another day at the office with Angela St. Lawrence, PhoneFemFatale Thu, 02 Feb 2012 04:02:25 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: TheContinental http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5472 TheContinental Sun, 18 Feb 2007 19:30:16 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5472 Oh, Mon Cheri. To spend an eternity with you, laying face to face. Now this, yes, this, is how you say, Bliss. I caress your bones, it make the chill. My head. I swoon. I lose my balance. Best I part for now. Au Revior, Mon Petit Chat Oh, Mon Cheri.

To spend an eternity with you, laying face to face. Now this, yes, this, is how you say, Bliss. I caress your bones, it make the chill.

My head. I swoon. I lose my balance. Best I part for now.

Au Revior,
Mon Petit Chat

]]> By: David C. http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5375 David C. Sat, 17 Feb 2007 00:33:47 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5375 Great Valentine post. You rock! Great Valentine post. You rock!

]]> By: science nerd http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5308 science nerd Thu, 15 Feb 2007 18:08:25 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5308 I defer to my colleagues who can breathe so much life into our wonderful language through verse. I simply say thank you for the impressionism of poetic expression and with your words in mind take in the image of the prehistoric, skeletal embrace that Angela chose to share first..... I defer to my colleagues who can breathe so much life into our wonderful language through verse. I simply say thank you for the impressionism of poetic expression and with your words in mind take in the image of the prehistoric, skeletal embrace that Angela chose to share first…..

]]> By: Angela http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5297 Angela Thu, 15 Feb 2007 15:01:18 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5297 Wow! The perfect Valentine's Day! Thanks so very much. I'm grinning from ear to ear. Wow! The perfect Valentine’s Day! Thanks so very much. I’m grinning from ear to ear.

]]> By: avonbard http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5278 avonbard Thu, 15 Feb 2007 02:49:00 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5278 A gain the year has brought us Lovers' Day. N ew poems greet you. All say they adore. G reat cleverness of rhyme they bring your way. I shun the effort, 'though I love you more. E ach other poet shapes his poem with wit; V ain is my try to rise above the rest. A t quips and phrases they all well acquit. L ess clever I, if my true worth's confessed. E 'en so, I cannot leave my words unsaid. N o prize but one am I intent to win: T o know you smile when my two words are read. I n smiling once, you cancel all my sin. N o craft, no art, no wit we're worthy of, E mbroiders well my simple phrase: I love. A gain the year has brought us Lovers’ Day.
N ew poems greet you. All say they adore.
G reat cleverness of rhyme they bring your way.
I shun the effort, ‘though I love you more.
E ach other poet shapes his poem with wit;
V ain is my try to rise above the rest.
A t quips and phrases they all well acquit.
L ess clever I, if my true worth’s confessed.
E ‘en so, I cannot leave my words unsaid.
N o prize but one am I intent to win:
T o know you smile when my two words are read.
I n smiling once, you cancel all my sin.
N o craft, no art, no wit we’re worthy of,
E mbroiders well my simple phrase: I love.

]]> By: litmajor http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5276 litmajor Thu, 15 Feb 2007 01:41:43 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5276 Do I dare try this after two Savants? My poetry's rough and unschooled. I'll never have Angela fooled. My words turn to mush. I stammer and blush. We both know who's ruler, who's ruled! Ever your servant, Mistress Valentine! Do I dare try this after two Savants?

My poetry’s rough and unschooled.
I’ll never have Angela fooled.
My words turn to mush.
I stammer and blush.
We both know who’s ruler, who’s ruled!

Ever your servant, Mistress Valentine!

]]> By: Booklover35 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5275 Booklover35 Thu, 15 Feb 2007 01:00:51 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5275 Miss St. Lawrence, I love you torrents. Happy Valentine's day! Miss St. Lawrence,
I love you torrents.

Happy Valentine’s day!

]]> By: Richard http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5274 Richard Thu, 15 Feb 2007 00:43:29 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5274 I've been checking on and off for this entry since I was sure you'd post one. I wish you someone who will make each and every day February 14th. I’ve been checking on and off for this entry since I was sure you’d post one.

I wish you someone who will make each and every day February 14th.

]]> By: PQS http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweets/#comment-5266 PQS Thu, 15 Feb 2007 00:09:47 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2007/02/14/valentine-sweet/#comment-5266 Vulpine Valentine Design Pervert Q. Savant Today, a day not rare nor fine I begged off work and, while supine, Did I, a-bed and sipping wine, Pen for you this anodyne I hope you think it not malign That I sent no boxes bound with twine Nor any flowers cut from vine Not orchid, rose, nor columbine Your wits are quick. You're not bovine. Your laughter's sweet. It's not ranine. Your form is svelte, hardly porcine All in all you're quite vulpine. Frown not too much on this design As you can see, I'm no Einstein. I've labored hard. But I'm in decline. But you deserved a valentine. So now will you be my concubine? Vulpine Valentine Design
Pervert Q. Savant

Today, a day not rare nor fine
I begged off work and, while supine,
Did I, a-bed and sipping wine,
Pen for you this anodyne

I hope you think it not malign
That I sent no boxes bound with twine
Nor any flowers cut from vine
Not orchid, rose, nor columbine

Your wits are quick. You’re not bovine.
Your laughter’s sweet. It’s not ranine.
Your form is svelte, hardly porcine
All in all you’re quite vulpine.

Frown not too much on this design
As you can see, I’m no Einstein.
I’ve labored hard. But I’m in decline.
But you deserved a valentine.

So now will you be my concubine?

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