Comments on: Bottom on Top http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/ Another day at the office with Angela St. Lawrence, PhoneFemFatale Thu, 02 Feb 2012 04:02:25 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Mr. Smith http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/#comment-15358 Mr. Smith Fri, 04 Jan 2008 22:43:17 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/#comment-15358 I'm with the gang. Your "Submissive Savant" (like most of the erotic writers your feature here) is very good at what he is doing in this piece. And the humanity you mentioned shows in every line, really. The Master is adoring and cherishing the slave with every stroke. I have a feeling that real power exchanges, good powere exchanges, would be like this. And that both parties would, indeed, be blessed. Maybe the BDSM crowd has a thing or two to teach we Vanilla people. Now if we'd only just listen. I’m with the gang. Your “Submissive Savant” (like most of the erotic writers your feature here) is very good at what he is doing in this piece. And the humanity you mentioned shows in every line, really. The Master is adoring and cherishing the slave with every stroke. I have a feeling that real power exchanges, good powere exchanges, would be like this. And that both parties would, indeed, be blessed.

Maybe the BDSM crowd has a thing or two to teach we Vanilla people. Now if we’d only just listen.

]]> By: Sponge Bob http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/#comment-15351 Sponge Bob Fri, 04 Jan 2008 19:47:53 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/#comment-15351 "I thrust my tongue down your throat. I burned with love for your strength as much as I wanted to conquer it." Damn good writing. Damn good. “I thrust my tongue down your throat. I burned with love for your strength as much as I wanted to conquer it.”

Damn good writing. Damn good.

]]> By: David C. http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/#comment-15349 David C. Fri, 04 Jan 2008 19:00:38 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/#comment-15349 Richard really paints an accurate and erotic BDSM encounter. My wish would be that any "submissive" would find such a Master. Then that we would all live happily ever. Richard really paints an accurate and erotic BDSM encounter. My wish would be that any “submissive” would find such a Master. Then that we would all live happily ever.

]]> By: The Professor http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/#comment-15340 The Professor Fri, 04 Jan 2008 13:20:10 +0000 http://www.zenfetish.com/2008/01/03/bottom-on-top-richard-and-the-caning/#comment-15340 A plethora of talent in such abundance. I'm not overstating nor being redundant. It's all here. A plethora of talent in such abundance. I’m not overstating nor being redundant. It’s all here.

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